Question

英語課上,老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下小作文為你同桌所寫，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（^），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

3．必須按答題要求做題，否則不給分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am

eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was

born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer

Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good

at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some

writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy

playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you

let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to

hearing from you soon.

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I

                                          wanted

am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I

           be

was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the

                                                             from

Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am

                                             well

especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English

especially

and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my

    do                            Besides

spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous

                               It

and I’ll ∧very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is

       be

027-89276628. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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