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第二節. 書面表達（滿分25 分）
假如你叫李華，你班的同學就中學生是否應該帶手機上學持不同意見。請你根據下列信息，給Teens的編輯寫一封信，介紹同學們的看法，并闡明自己的觀點。

60%的同學贊成	40%的同學反對
1.方便和家長、同學聯系 2.有拍照、聽音樂等多功能 可以放松自己 3.時尚	1.上網聊天，沉迷游戲，經常發短信 2.影響學生集中精力學習 3.有時影響課堂教學 4.增加家長經濟負擔

注意 : 1. 信的格式與開頭已為你寫好;            2. 詞數:120 左右
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether the school students should carry a mobile phone to school.  Opinions on the question are divided as follows.
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Yours sincerely
Li Ming

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Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school. Opinions on the question are divided as follows.
Sixty percent of the students subscribe to the view that students can bring a mobile phone to school because it has many advantages. If a student has a mobile phone, he she can contact his parents and friends easily. (It is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.) He can also take pictures and enjoy music to relax himself. Besides, it’s fashionable to have a mobile phone.
While 40 percent of the students are opposed to the view, because with mobile phones some students may have a chat on the Internet and be addicted to playing games. What is worse, some even get into the habit of sending text messages to their friends. Thus, students may not focus their attention on (concentrate on /pay much attention to) their lessons. If by chance the phone is not turned off, the ringing will disturb the class. Furthermore, using mobile phones will add to their parents’ economic burdens.
Actually, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones. Personally, I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,

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