Question

 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Ken,
I'm very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I'm glad you had a
wonderfully time during the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the
countryside with some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace
and quiet, which is what I can't enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that
we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine what  fun  it
was to swimming  together with friends in the cool, clean river on such hot days.
In fact , I had never been had a better holiday before . I took plenty photos there
and I keep them where I can see them  every day as they always reminds me of
my stay in the country.
Yours,
Li Ping

Answer 1

Dear Ken,
I'm very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I'm glad you had a
excited
wonderfully time during the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the
wonderful                                            took 
countryside with some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace and
friends
quiet, which is what I can't enjoy in big cities. There was  river nearby, in that we went
a             which
swimming every now and then. You can never imagine what fun it was to swimming
swim
together with friends in the cool, clean river on such hot days. In fact, I had never
been had a better holiday before. I took plenty  photos there and I keep them where I
of
can see them every day as they always reminds me of my stay in the country.
remind

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