Question

When he was senior 3 student in a high school, Li Hua studied    1.   

very hard so as to go to a famous university. He often stays up late    2.   

in the night. Finally he passed the College Entrance Examination    3.    

and was admitted to a key university. And after he went to university,  4.    

he became very lazy. He wasted time in going to the cinema, played     5.    

cards, making friends and doing things that had something to do with   6.   

his studies. He often got up late. At many times, he was still in      7.   

bed while others were having his lessons in the classroom at ten in   8.   

the morning . Int the end of the first term he failed in all exams. As a     9.   

result, he had to give up his schooling and leave the university.       10.    

Answer 1

was 后面加a

2. stays 改為stayed

3. in 改為into

4.And 改為But

5. played 改為playing

6. something 改為nothing

7. At 改為For

8. his 改為their

9. In 改為At

10. 正確

解析:

1. 缺少不定冠詞

2. 文章的前后時態應該是一致的，用過去時態

3. 介詞錯誤

4. 前后邏輯關系是轉折關系

5. wasting, playing 和后面的making，doing 應該是并列的

6. 根據故事的意思應該是在李華上大學之后變得懶惰，做一些與學習無關的事情， have nothing to do with 與…無關

7. 介詞錯誤

8. 因為主語是others

9. at the end of “ 在…末尾（盡頭）” in the end “ 最后”

10. 正確