Question

你是校報英語版編輯Jack Smith，主要負責“你問我答”專欄，請就中學生李華的來信作答，給出適當建議。

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m a Senior 3 student. I have to take English exams every two weeks. But the results are always discouraging in spite of my great efforts. I don't know why. I 'm afraid something is wrong with my English learning method. What’s worse, before each exam, I'm always feeling nervous and cannot sleep well. Could you give me some suggestions?

                                                                               Li Hua

注意：

針對提出問題，給出信息完整的建議；

適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

詞數：100左右。開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people.

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Sincerely yours,

Jack Smith

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Dear li Hua.

  I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be chanllenging for some people. However , there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties.

  Firstly , obtain as large a vocabulary as possible .It is a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some typical sentences. Practice makes perfect .Therefore , doing enough exercises can definitely improve your listening and writing .In this way you are sure to improve your English.

  As for examination anxiety , it’s unnecessary for you to wok too late before the exam .Instead , you ‘d better go to bed earlier than usual , otherwise you would feel tired the next day . It is also suggested that a jug of milk may help you get a sound sleep .In addition , consult your teachers if necessary .

  I do hope my advice is helpful to you .

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求就中學生李華的來信做出答復，給出適當建議。寫作前必須認真閱讀來信，弄清信中提出的問題，以便提出針對性建議。此封來信中提出了兩個問題，一是英語學習方面遇到的問題，而是考前的緊張，所以在回信中要圍繞這兩方面作答。此外，在時態(tài)選擇上要使用一般現在時來表述建議。而且也要注意運用多樣化的句式和句法結構，以提高文章檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇范文在結構安排上采用三段式，首段提出寫信的目的，其他兩段分別就如何提高英語成績和消除考前恐懼癥給出建議，這樣的安排使得文章結構清晰、層次分明。此外文中however、therefore、instead、otherwise等副詞和短語in addition、in this way的使用也有效地起到承接上下文的作用，使范文行文連貫、邏輯性強。

考點：考查提綱作文。