Question

短文改錯(cuò) (共10小題；每小題1分, 滿分10分)
假設(shè)英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一
個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
This morning I went to the supermarket, buying a toy and went to see my nephew , a 8-year-old boy named Jack. She was playing with some of his friend in the yard when I arrived there. The moment he found that I came to see him with his most favorite toy, Jack jumped with joy. Every boy and girl present wanted very much to have a look the toy. However, Jack doesn’t want his friends to see it. He was about to hide the toy then I stopped him. “Let your friends to play with your toy as well, Jack — you must learn to share.” I said. Realized that he was wrong, Jack played with the toy together with his friends.

Answer 1

【小題1】buying改為 bought
【小題2】a改為an
【小題3】He改為She
【小題4】friend改為 friends
【小題5】去掉most
【小題6】look后加 at
【小題7】doesn’t改為 didn’t
【小題8】then改為 when
【小題9】去掉to
【小題10】realized改為 realizing

解析試題分析：
【小題1】此處went和bought為并列謂語，故將buying改為 bought
【小題2】eight為元音音素發(fā)音開頭，前面應(yīng)用an修飾，an 8-year-old boy一個(gè)八歲的男孩
【小題3】從上文boy提示及下文 his可知此處應(yīng)該用he作主語，故He改為She
【小題4】從some of提示后面的名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將friend改為 friends。他的一些朋友some of his friends.
【小題5】favorite一詞，本身就表達(dá)“最喜愛的”,故前面不用再加most。
【小題6】have a look 是一個(gè)短語，意思是“看一看”，后面不接賓語。have a look at 看看， 看一眼也是“看”的意思，但表示看什么具體的東西，而且at后面必須加名詞才正確
【小題7】文章的整體時(shí)態(tài)為過去時(shí)，故要將doesn’t改為 didn’t
【小題8】此處應(yīng)用一個(gè)表時(shí)間的連詞，故用when, be about to do when...正要做某事，這時(shí)（突然)...。
【小題9】let sb do sth 為固定的結(jié)構(gòu)，省略to的不定式。
【小題10】觀察句子結(jié)構(gòu)，此處用分詞作狀語，Jack與realize之間為被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞realizing。
考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生對詞匯語法的掌握情況
點(diǎn)評：答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。