Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 （﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am I. My mother is  a  ordinary  teacher.  She works  hard at  school,  just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She have been suffering from arthritis(關節(jié)炎) for  many years. In spite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope. I still remember the day and when my mother received a card of congratulations for Teacher’s Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother because she is my best teacher as good as my mother.

 

Answer 1

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teacher. She works hard at school, just  as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t ∧good

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congratulations for Teacher’s Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard

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works; Happy Teacher’s Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my

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eyes. I am proud of my mother because she is my best teacher as good as my mother.     

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