Question

假設你是李華，你剛認識一位筆友。應筆友要求寫一封電子郵件介紹你的學校和學校生活，并歡迎他來你的學校參觀。請根據以下要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

1.      你在第一中學上學，學校又大又現代化；

2.      每天花半小時乘公交車去上學，上學從不遲到；

3.      你的教室在一樓；

4.      早上通常先做早操，8點開始上課；

5.      同學都很友好，空余時間相互聊天；

6.      在校總是過得很開心。

注意：

1.      短文須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2.      詞數60個左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. _____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. I study at No. 1 Middle School. Our school is big and modern. It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day. I’m never late for school. My classroom is on the ground/first floor. We usually do morning exercises first. The lessons start at 8. My classmates are all very nice. We chat with each other in our free time. I always have a good time at school. Welcome to my school.

 Sandy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。根據提綱內容可知用一般現在時，按照提綱要求逐條翻譯成英文名字。同時還應注意寫作中要有適當性的發揮。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 late for,do morning exercises ,have a good time,以及Let me tell you about my school,Our school is big and modern.It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day,We chat with each other in our free time文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文。