Question

2．Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation．（根據所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信，不少于60字．標點符號不占格）
Suppose  you are jack．Your friend Mary is upset  because she has failed in a PE test．What do you
 think？Try to give her some advice on how to train herself．（假如你是Jack，你的朋友Mary由于沒有通過體育測試而感到難過．請給她寫一封信．談談你的看法，并給她一些怎樣鍛煉自己的建議．）
 Dear Mary，
                                                                                                                               Yours，Jack．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful．首先，提醒自己保持平靜是最有幫助的．
這里keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace 是動名詞短語做主語，the most helpful是helpful的最高級形式．
【高分句型二】
Second，it will help you to relax if you spend some time doing some after school activities like sports．其次，如果你抽出時間做一些課外活動，比如體育運動，將會幫助你放松一下．
句子中if引導一個條件狀語從句，主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現在時，spend time doing sth花費時間做某事

解答 Dear Mary，
I am sorry to hear that you  has failed in a PE test．Knowing that you are sad about the result，I am quite worried．Actually，the most important thing is not the result of the exam but the learning journey．（引出話題）
　　There are some effective ways to calm down．First，keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful（高分句型）．Second，it will help you to relax if you spend some time doing some after school activities like sports（高分句型）．Talk to your parents and friends，who are always ready to comfort you．Finally，make a plan to exercise．As for the game you are weak in，you should exercise more．In a word，the result itself is not really important，but we should work hard while learning．（我的看法及建議）
                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                        Jack．

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．