Question

Bill有幸結識了一位外國朋友Peter,假如你是Bill,請根據表格內容，給你的筆友 Peter寫一封email，以便更好地了解你。

自我介紹	姓名，年齡，外表，個性特征，生活方式，學習情況。
興趣愛好	下棋，彈鋼琴，打籃球------
上次的假期經歷及感受	去北京游玩------

要求：1.文章必須包括表中所有信息,可適當增加細節,但不要逐字翻譯。
2.根據需要可適當用上比較等級的句子。
3.詞數在80--100詞左右，文章開頭結尾已給出,你只需接著寫,不
計入總詞數。
4.表達準確,條理清楚、語句連貫,文中不得出現真實的地名、班名
和人名。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m glad to be your pen pal.Let me tell you something about myself.                      
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
China is a great country for a visit.I hope you can come to China some day. I’m waiting for your coming!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Bill

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m glad to be your pen pal. Let me tell you something about myself. My name is Bill. I’m 15 years old. I’m tall but a little heavy. I ’m outgoing and helpful. At school ,I’m hard-working. My teacher says I’m the best students in my class. After school, I often help my friends with their lessons.
I have many hobbies. I like playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps. I often show my talents in the school Art Festival. I also like playing sports .I exercise two or three times a week. I love playing basketball. I’m on the school basketball team. I have a healthy lifestyle.
Now I want to tell you my last vacation, too. I went to Beijing for a trip with my family. We visited the Great Wall,Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. They are great places of interest in Beijing. We also enjoyed delicious food in Beijing hutong. It was a wonderful trip. It was so forgetful.
China is a great country for a visit. I hope you can come to China some day. I’m waiting for your coming!
Best wishes!                                                
Yours,
Bill

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細但很簡單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要仔細考慮，不可遺漏要點，也可適當發揮。根據材料內容可知，本文以一般現在時態為主，主語是第一人稱和第三人稱。
【亮點說明】這篇文章主要是自我介紹和自己的旅游經歷。文中使用了outgoing，places of interest等較高級的短語和詞匯，而且還應用了形容詞最高級best，playing等非謂語動詞以及使用了恰當的連接詞also等為文章增色不少。