Question

假如你是李華，你的筆友Jim最近沉溺于玩電腦游戲，為此你很擔(dān)心。請根據(jù)下表提示給Jim 寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�及建議。
要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。2. 要點完整，層次清楚，語法正確。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Jim 過去	功課好，積極參加學(xué)校的各項活動。
Jim 現(xiàn)在	對學(xué)習(xí)沒興趣，上課不專心。
你的看法	玩電腦游戲可能使你放松，但……
你的建議	(至少發(fā)揮兩點)

Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.
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Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I really feel worried about you.You used to do well in your lessons and took an active part in the activities at school.But now you are so crazy about computer games that you have no interest in your schoolwork and don’t listen to the teachers as carefully as before in class.Also,you can’t hand in your homework on time.
Perhaps playing computer games can make you fell relaxed,but if you spend too much time on it,you will have less time to study.And it may do harm to your health.For example,it can hurt your eyes and neck.
I hope you should achieve a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies.Why not join in some outdoor activities when you feel bored?As your friend,I’ll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一封信，向吉姆提出建議。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一二人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如used to sth過去常常做某事；takepart in參加；as……as……和……一樣；hand in上交；on time按時；do harm to傷害；why not
do sth為什么不做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。