Question

現在電話運用越來越普及，有大約57%中學生在使用手機，有的學生用手機來輔助學習，而有的學生則是用手機來上網，聊天，看小說等。你就學生使用手機現象以及利弊說一下個人看法。并建議學生正確使用手機。（部少于80詞）

Advantages(利)	Disadvantages(弊)
查詢新單詞，獲取國內外新信息和新知識	過度地玩游戲，上網，影響睡眠和學習
打電話，聽音樂	和陌生人聊天，學壞習慣
拍有意義的圖片	看不健康的小說
在危險中，向老師，家長和警察求助	晚上熄燈后，使用手機發信息
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提示詞：search, ask for, information, knowledge, infiunce their study,chat with,habits,novels, correctly
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Answer 1

At present, mobile phones are become more and more popular. According to the report, about 57% students have mobile phones. Some students use them to search new words and ask for new information and knowledge. Some use phones to listen to music and take some interesting pictures. And they can call teachers, their parents or policemen when they are in need. But every coin has two sides. There are also some disadvantages brought by the phones. Some students use them to play games, which is bad for their sleeping and study. Besides, some students chat with strangers and learn bad habits. Some read unhealthy novels. They use phones to send message when it is time to sleep. So, I think everyone should use phones correctly. If you use it properly, you can benefit from it; otherwise, it will waste your time and ruin your life.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文，題中給出了寫作的要點信息，在作文中要盡力體現出這些要點。注意文章結構的嚴謹和邏輯性。文中可使用一些承接性的句子和短語來加強文章的流暢性。
【亮點說明】這篇文章結構嚴謹，要點齊全，表達準確流利；文中使用了很多有用的表達方式，如：According to根據；But every coin has two sides.但是每個硬幣都有兩面；listen to music聽音樂；Some students use them to play games, which is bad for their sleeping and study一些學生用來玩游戲，這對他們的睡眠和學習有不好的影響；which引導一個非限制性定語從句。