Question

動物是我們人類的朋友，對人類來說非常重要。但是現在動物越來越少，野生動物更是越來越少，很多野生動物都處于瀕危狀態。請以“We need to protect wildlife animals”為題，寫一篇詞數100左右的文章。
要點：1.為什么有些野生動物處于危險之中？
2.為什么保護野生動物很重要？
3.作為中學生，我們應該怎樣保護野生動物？

Answer 1

Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. For example，with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrower and narrower. Many of the wild animals, now are confronted with food crisis. At the same time, man is killing off animals just for getting their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat. In order to protect our resources of ecology，people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty. There fore, measures of the following should be taken pollution standards are made to keep down poisons；killing off certain rare species is prohibited，national parks should be set up as wild life reserves. Only if we human beings take some drastic measures can wild animals be preserved.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹保護野生動物的重要性。結合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現在時態，第一人稱進行敘述，注意主謂一致問題。句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: For example例如；At the same time同時；kill off消滅，殺滅；in order to為了；only if只有等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更加精彩。